tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4606802235312406534.post47385730811995457..comments2013-08-19T08:06:36.705-07:00Comments on Under the starry skies: শহীদAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06272714225217114517noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4606802235312406534.post-85995977804184519332013-07-19T20:12:04.177-07:002013-07-19T20:12:04.177-07:00:):)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06272714225217114517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4606802235312406534.post-66783909602772235342013-07-19T20:11:53.475-07:002013-07-19T20:11:53.475-07:00thank you Ru!thank you Ru!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06272714225217114517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4606802235312406534.post-23048587514166072142013-07-19T12:48:30.498-07:002013-07-19T12:48:30.498-07:00Daarun Daarun !Daarun Daarun !debipriyanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4606802235312406534.post-2681894675160489632012-06-17T04:06:06.722-07:002012-06-17T04:06:06.722-07:00hi i cACo...
i just loved it..hi i cACo...<br />i just loved it..Ruhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04057436943791271168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4606802235312406534.post-34327972562163335262012-05-07T10:08:05.976-07:002012-05-07T10:08:05.976-07:00Khasa. Bishes kore sesh diker humor ta reason gone...Khasa. Bishes kore sesh diker humor ta reason gone bad.SamSpadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14172802856226756259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4606802235312406534.post-81693639788179130252012-05-07T08:22:18.265-07:002012-05-07T08:22:18.265-07:00Shesh line’ta jaake bole haalka med. Thakleo hoy, ...Shesh line’ta jaake bole haalka med. Thakleo hoy, na thakleo khhoti nei. Insignificant byapar aarki. Kintu baki’ta dibyi. Abhishek’dar second comment’tar sutro dhore, short fiction’e the apparent lack of story in the narrative can also work out pretty well. Tabe sekhetre anyanyo dike ektu najor dewa bhalo. Mane muul byapar jehetu ek line’er sehetu anyanyo khejur’ta ektu mon diye kora uchit. Kintu I repeat, eta amar dibyi laaglo.Hatturi Hanzohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12537417370829473242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4606802235312406534.post-50716514966319137382012-05-06T09:33:47.917-07:002012-05-06T09:33:47.917-07:00will heed the suggestions of esteemed readers and ...will heed the suggestions of esteemed readers and delete the last line. thank you again.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06272714225217114517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4606802235312406534.post-75679417064613037132012-05-06T09:32:24.909-07:002012-05-06T09:32:24.909-07:00thank you! i really appreciate candid feedback.thank you! i really appreciate candid feedback.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06272714225217114517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4606802235312406534.post-56829575918624827902012-05-06T09:15:37.343-07:002012-05-06T09:15:37.343-07:00The Maestro hath spoken, তাহলে হয়ত সত্যিই ভাল হয়...The Maestro hath spoken, তাহলে হয়ত সত্যিই ভাল হয়নি, কে জানে। তবে আমার মত non-বিদগ্ধ পাঠকের কাছে দারুণ লেগেছে, যদিও I realize that the target readership would essentially be a niche, BB-soaked readership. There are two small suggestions, though: (a) Lose the last line. As Abhishek says, it seems superfluous. (b) Change the 'আমি' to 'য়ামি' - feels more appropriate.SUIRAUQAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17918432443330964561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4606802235312406534.post-23946250328269049102012-05-06T09:08:29.952-07:002012-05-06T09:08:29.952-07:00Also, think of how to weave a story; not how soon ...Also, think of how to weave a story; not how soon you can end it.Abhishek Mukherjeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04492031639536656851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4606802235312406534.post-72080620920783172502012-05-06T08:12:25.293-07:002012-05-06T08:12:25.293-07:00গল্পটা জমেনি, আগেরদুটোর মত। :(
আর শেষ লাইনটা একেব...গল্পটা জমেনি, আগেরদুটোর মত। :(<br /><br />আর শেষ লাইনটা একেবারেই নিষ্প্রয়োজন।Abhishek Mukherjeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04492031639536656851noreply@blogger.com